When i think chibi, i think much more child-like. smaller, and (usually) cuter. Then again, almost all my chibi experience is "chibitallia" My opinion for a more "chibi" look would be for holo to be offering the apple to the viewer, and have star twinkly eyes.
My eyeballs seem to be playing a trick on me with this artwork. Her torso sometimes seems to be behind her legs, sometimes sorta in front.
Her left eye (the one on the viewer's right) is sorta impossibly placed, but that's normal for a cartoonish drawing such as this.
her legs are infront n_n and by... "impossibly placed" you mean that is like the hair looks transparent?
I don't know what the characters are "supposed" to look like, but i imagine you did them great justice with this artwork.
The stomach... just... eugh. i like the rest of it, just not the super enlarged stomach.
an air of greek...
this has a venis de milo feel to it. I like that. The monocrome also ups the greatness of this artwork. great job.
the pic sums it up
W T F.... where's the food?
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